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Beautiful imagery Gideon. :)

I also liked that your poem rhymed well.

I liked that your poem was easy to read and flowed smoothly, simple words yet evocative. :)

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Abhishek Sainani
Abhishek Sainani

Written by Abhishek Sainani

An aspiring writer who often juggles between his inner world, his dream world, and the real world. Writes poetry, humorous observations and opinion pieces.

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